10 shot story

The music fits the theme of the edit and also there is some sense of continuity editing as the shots flow into another. There is also a reasonable amount of camera shots/angles. However, some of the shots are hand held and do not look at good.

The music fits in with the theme of the story and starts at a good point within the story. The tracking shot across the hallway was also very well done and gave a creative aspect to the camera shots used. 

Wide range of camera angles, the shots could flow a bit better and be more stable. Although, the concept of the letter under the door and the fact that the music matched the upbeat tone was very good.